OK
I guess it had something of the feel of Tankmen to it.
the flips the tank did were a nice touch.
where did you get the sounds from? Was the clapping from Windows?
Reviews for "TANKMEN: Target Practice"
fadedshadow responds:
i got my sounds from flashkit.com and findsounds.com and others were from dusty_gorilla
Mediocre.
It was alright. The voice quality was low, and there weren't really any good jokes. However, the visual quality wasn't all that bad.
Work on your material.
fadedshadow responds:
..........mmkay?
It's okay
It's okay.
fadedshadow responds:
not super fantabular? damn
Good premise...But the humour fell flat
I liked the idea of the firing of the tank. The two 'Tank Men' blowing things up is a welcome change from all the chatter that ruins most of the parodies of the original Tank Men.
What I stopped me from laughing was your choice of targets. The hitting of the guy (argh I forgot his name) from "It's a Wonderful Life" and Bill Cosbey took the focus away from the tank man universe. When you shifted that focus away from this universe, it spoiled the joke of them shooting stuff...Thus spoils your original premise...
What I recommend you do is make a second Target Practice flash work. This time focus more on the action and consequences of those actions, while you continue to focus on targets "WITHIN" the tankmen universe. If you're able to pull together a few things that can make your friends laugh, you might just have something you can use to make the people of newgrounds really enjoy this idea of yours.
Good Luck.
fadedshadow responds:
hmm, not really planning on making a sequel, but given the chance that i decide to go through with it which will probably be sometime after i work through my college problems and i have plenty of free time, then i will definately take your suggestions into consideration.
hmmm.
nice drawing, poor voices, no editing it seems. u just talk into a piece of crap mic?
fadedshadow responds:
don't own a mic, multiple people helped with this