Its alright
Flash is ok, story is unorginal though but the sound is aweful.. The recording quality is rather bad and your track from Ghost in the shell (which is awesome btw) was way to loud the reason its so loud in ghost is because they don't speak during the track, that time is reserved for physcologic imagery and the like.
Not the worst thing i have seen by any stretch of the imagination it was sort of middle of the road but im sure you could do better.
Wannabe