potential
looks good, but story is a bit to fast to understande what is going on. soundtrack was good but at points i couldn't hear what they were saying over the music. lookin forward to the next ep but it needs to improve quite a bit to be one of the best on NG.
Yep
Action is messy ; story is not really comprehensible; weird idea to use the music from "Ghost in the Shell"...
well um
good animation and it had a lot of styleish fight scenes but the story was a little deep u cant expect the majority of people on newgrounds to understand thw whole story.also the why was the blood a strange orange and not red?
get flash 8 and either remake this or try and make the screen a little bigger and use better mics for the voices they sounded pretty distorted
hmm
art was good, most of the animation was good, storyline made no sense. If your going to do a flash with a storyline that in depth start a tv show, no ones gona really care on newgrounds. Some of the voice acting was terrible, not the actors, the mic qualitys were really crap. keep up the good work though.
Almost...
Well, the art was excellent, very impressive.
Unfortunately, after the introduction the story had 0 flow and didn't make a lick of sense, the voice acting throughout is all-round terrible and differs extremely seemingly at random in terms of volume and quality (although a few lines of dialogue spoken by the nameless character were right on the money).
Despite it's flaws, there's some real effort and potential here, and it's far more deserving of front page then a lot of the crap lately, well done.