Reviews for Marios Holiday Mixup

[Omgee]

It's a start.

It's not bad, but I think you could do a lot better with this.

For starters, lose the "Wii" part of it. It's completely unrelated to the movie, and it's silly. It's a movie about Mario and the holidays, not about the Wii.

Also, the sprites didn't quite look right. Mario and Luigi both looked a little thin. The movements weren't quite right on, either. Compare what you did to a Mario game, and notice the difference.

The words popping up out of the box were a nice idea, but the font seemed a little plain. You could spruce it up a little and add some holiday-ish stuff to go with it, or at least make the words the appropriate colours for the holiday (red and green for Christmas, blue and white for Hanukkah, etc.)

It's a good first effort, though, and I hope you'll work some more on this.

Oh, yes, and re-release it around the holidays. :)

porkman385 responds:

Yeah i hate that, but I couldnt get any good spritesheets. Ill try to fix that when I "spruce it up" :P Thanks for the honest comments, I take constructive criticism well.

[Halo-Scaler]

What Was That!?!?!?

you say you made sprite movies because you sucked at drawing. Well you suck at this to. At the beginning the sprites were to thin and the backgound was to dull. Also When mario looked up the sprite changed! the whole movie was boring.

[XxwaSSupxX]

Hmm...

Well... Sorry to say, but the holidays aren't for another oh.. 4 months?
But really... It kinda sucked. The sprites where misshapen... the tweens were too slow... the quality of the sprites and the music were very bad to say the least... Just keep practicing. Trust me, I started out like this. Now I'm a 3.00 flash average... in one year. Just keep working at it.

[Glutton]

kinda intresting

its pretty ok i guess. could have been better though. it was kinda intresting but not all that good!

[Shadow-da-Hedgie]

Crap.

You say you couldn't draw, and that's why you sucked at flash. However, that can't be, since you sucked at this as well.

You made the Mario sprites too thin at the beginning, and he changed sprite style while looking up.

Plus, it wasn't good at all.

The animation was too choppy.