nice job!
personally, I don't like the extremely bloody Madness cartoon, which will work on your advantage. I think you did a great job, but mind the spelling. It's not "and he Entered the Kings study" but "and he entered the King's study" (the capital E and the mark). I also think that you should shorten the time of the texts "he found men" ect. It's kinda long, though it could possibly have been used to get sinc with the music, i didn't watch that. Excuse my peckyness ^.^ Anyway, nice music, nice art and a nice movie in total.
Keep up with the good work,
Kaori Himoru