Reviews for Battle Between Rivals

[WarKirby]

Pretty Darn Good

That was excellent. Doubly so as I am a Mortal Kombat fan. I had a few minor issues that held me back from giving a perfect score though.

1. The characters were too chunky. This made it hard to see what was going on sometimes. Put them on a diet for the sequel.

2. The fatalities were weak. The first one, with the fan was ruined by a terrible camera angle and too little blood. The decapitation was good, but spoiled by the fact that he was already dead before the 'Finish Him'. The spike pit was marred by poor sound effects, especially on the uppercut just before. The spikes were also too thick. The last one was spoiled by the characters being too thick.

Sorry for the rant, but I really did like it. Thinner stickmen and better fatalities next time please!

WarKirby

joshuaskillsrobles responds:

To thick? Come on they were the perfect size for that angle. Anyways ill take your advise and see what happens. And Sorry for the poor sounds and blood its just it takes so long to find good sounds, and the blood im not good at it yet.

[piemaster89]

Nice

The lines for the stick figures are too thick. After a couple of flips, it became hard to tell which limb was which. Also, it might be just me, but I don't like it when a song runs through the entire video. Even if it is the Mortal Kombat theme song.

joshuaskillsrobles responds:

Well get used to the song thing, almost everyone does it.

[XwaynecoltX]

Could be abit improved on .

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this one, allthough it could be improved on such as some more detail with the sticks, eyes and such, the music on this was just great, very nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~some more detail with the characters would be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
Decent fight but needs abit more.

~X~

joshuaskillsrobles responds:

Thanks, the 2nd one will be improved.