quite good
need a new mike prehaps???
im shure you could do better with moar practice
quite good
need a new mike prehaps???
im shure you could do better with moar practice
Could use some work
And it could, I'm not a fan of moving clipings but still, prettying up the clipings would be nice.
I didn't understand much of the story, so I think the plots a bit loose, probably needs a bit of work.
But I love the humor though.
'MOMMY! ... oh wait, she's dead' That's great stuff.
Sure I will tell you
All you did was insert pictures into it. It is not really a flash, More of a...lets see a slide show..Pluse it did not make since!
God Life.
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Did you ever hear of sprite movies?