very random
this cartoon is very random.
Reviews for "A stick (longer)"
blanblan responds:
No kidding. O_o
Much better!
Great fixes to the original. I liked it.
This was rather random...
but that's how I like my flash!
-Comments-
This resembled a flash n00b's work at first, but then I saw some finer points in it. Quite funny, and very random. Apple Jacks! lol
-Improvements-
Try stepping up the graphics a bit on the non-stick things.(Stick figures can't get any better really) Also, the sound was quite and short. Maybe add more FX, or BGM.
It was alright.
__The Good__
The graphics were pretty good, they ran very smoothly. Also a nice style to this flash, I liked all of the random violence going on in this flash. Also the music was pretty good. I also thought this flash had some humor into it.
__The Bad__
I didn't stand the whole cereal box thing going on. Sure it was random, but it would have looked better if they were other stick figures. Also some blood would have been nice. You should also make your flashes longer!
__Over All__
Over all this flash is pretty good. The graphics were unique and had a great style. Also the music was good too. Next time you make a flash like this be sure to add some blood and make it a lot longer! Pretty good job making this flash, keep up the good work!
blanblan responds:
Yep... longer. Definately. I always do this... I never end up making anything long, I'm so lazy. :(
Thanks for reviewing!
((( INTERESTING )))
~~REVIEW~~
Haha well ill admit it was funny and i was entertained with it, but i do think you need to add more content because it was a huge file for what you had, either that o rlower the size somewhat, it was amusing though, nice job...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress and compress again...
~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and random fun with this one...
~X~