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Reviews for "A stick (longer)"

Nice stuff!

I loved this!

The animation was very smooth and the graphics nice :)
Even though it's a stick, I liked it, because it's well done!
The background music was good, it was good to hear, and the FX is also good!

Hahaha, all those cereal boxes fighting the stick were really funny!
We all love to see sticks suffering :D

Good job!

-Review Request Club-

blanblan responds:

Not everyone likes sticks. :(

Thank you for the reviewing of my submission. :)

It was alright.

__The Good__
The graphics were pretty good, they ran very smoothly. Also a nice style to this flash, I liked all of the random violence going on in this flash. Also the music was pretty good. I also thought this flash had some humor into it.

__The Bad__
I didn't stand the whole cereal box thing going on. Sure it was random, but it would have looked better if they were other stick figures. Also some blood would have been nice. You should also make your flashes longer!

__Over All__
Over all this flash is pretty good. The graphics were unique and had a great style. Also the music was good too. Next time you make a flash like this be sure to add some blood and make it a lot longer! Pretty good job making this flash, keep up the good work!

blanblan responds:

Yep... longer. Definately. I always do this... I never end up making anything long, I'm so lazy. :(

Thanks for reviewing!

K

^^Good Points^^
Very good animations. They were clear and obeyed the laws of the world very well. Nice job on that, it's the best part. This was pretty creative, a lot more than most stick movies with random violence. I thought the apple jacks were pretty funny as well as the other cereal boxes.

^^Needs Improving^^
Kind of short. I guess I didn't watch the first one either, but that must be really short !

blanblan responds:

Yup, really really short. :/

Thank you very much for reviewing. :)

Random stick abuse? Suits me.

I enjoy these sorts of movies, and yours was no exception. If there was a problem, it would be that its very short. But it demonstrates you are capable of more, so I hope to see more from you. Also, I've never heard of Apple Jacks; go figure... (I'm Australian, guess we don't have 'em, if we do; i need to get out more).
-Review Request Club-

blanblan responds:

Um yeah, I'm from America, so I have no idea if they have Apple Jacks in Austrailia. =P

Thanks for reviewing. :)

ya man

the drawing is like old and it was good :D