Awesome!
This was great, and inspiring.
All the little creatures you created, the characters were all so stylish and neat. I loved the scraggly paint-brush style lines that drew the octopus-style guy and the sun. I loved how the yellow stiched creature looked.
I loved how you used sillouhettes, colors, and artistic focus to tell the story. Like how when the yellow creature reminisces about his past, and its all wiggly cave-drawing style. And how it fades back to reality when his tale is done.
Very good. And deserving of a much higher score than it has.
Good luck on future cartoons!