pretty good
You had some nice humor in there! thats a bonus point. You seemed to have had troubles with the mics though, a lot of the blowing was sent into the mic... baaaaaaad.
Graphics werent the best but now-a-days, just claim it as *your style of flash* most major artists are known for the way they draw stuff... like the dude from madness and what not.
Anyways, good job! keep it up
Yeah, im aware of the mic. >_< whish i couldve fixed it though.
Thanks for the review!
Wow, for a flash that old, it's really something
~The good~
The graphics in this were really well done, especially since this was made two years ago, which is pretty damn impressive. The music you had was pretty subtle in this, which is good because it lets you listen more to the plot, than the actual song, which is how background music is supposed to be. You also had your own style, which gave a very good atmosphere, kind of a dark and thug-like school, which is pretty cool.
~The bad~
Well, the voice-acting wasn't too bad, but sometimes you blew into the mic, and it sounded really bad, and got annoying before the end of the flash. This also could've had more of an in-depth plot, like why "The guy with black sunglasses =P" is trying to attack "The guy with brown hair"? Some names would've also been better as you can connect more with the characters.
Overall, this was a very good flash for your first one, and not to mention this was actually made in 2004. Still, the voice-acting could've been a lot more clear, and this could've had more of a plot. I hope this review was helpful!
3/5
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It sure was helpful!
Well, see, The original idea (i already had storyboards for 6 episodes), was to introduce the characters on chapter two. But i never even got around to drawing some new renditions. Perhaps someday i will.
Thanks again for the review. :D
OK
I think you need to work on the voice quality if it wasn't for the text at the bottom I would've had a hard time understanding what they where saying. It would have been a good idea for an intro of who was the main character and what's he is about. It wouldn't hurt to spend a little more time on the detail of your flash as well. Overall I thought this was an OK flash and with a little work could be a lot better. 2/5
Yeah, old file.
His life was supposed to appear on chapter two, if i ever get around to make it.
not bad
animation isn't up ta scratch ie when the black guy is walking at the start, but i still like it and want to see more
Yeah, im aware. I was a bad animator back then (not saying im great now, but still).
Expect more then. :D
umm..
it was really diffrent. Well it wasn't hte worst I've ever seen, but it was kind of pointless what was the story line? And the souynd was really bad
Well, about a year ago, i made the storyline for the next 4 chapters. But i got bored and decided to NOT do the "series". The story was going to be introduced on chapter two, i might end up doing it sometime.
Thanks.