MR. STICKY!
i lolled at the sticky dance!
Reviews for "JapanEaseLesson1"
lol
I want to go to Japan at the end of the year, looks like I'm gonna struggle.
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Great Effort.
Yeah you are right that you are not supposed to have "-kun or -san" with a name is you are refering to yourself. You only use it when speaking about other people. In my opinion, even using "watakushi" in the introduction was too polite. It felt a little strange to me.
Other then that, if the art was improved, and perhaps if you added how to read and write it, would be a great place to build a foundation to start from.
You could make flashes based on topics and focus on those. Like one could be introductions, or everyday phrases, instead of placing random words and grammer strcuture together.
I would like to see more.
good, acceptable
Great concept, only problem was it was too cheesy. Try to make it more edgy, more fun, and although it's japanese you're learning doesn't mean that you have to put up an epic flute japanese song. I didn't like the drawing of yourself either, not the quality but the style just too cheesy. Make the tutorials more down to earth.
Cayler responds:
Thanks for the great review. Most aren't very thorough if even at all, so I thank you for taking the time to give your honest critique. I will definitely consider what you said in my next one.
flagging ??
lol i know more actionscript now more than you do... lololol gotoAndstops??
i already know simple gravity and physiscs lol!!!!