good try but...
no... the wasn't good...
the graphics where very goods... and the sounds great...
but the real problem here where three:
- The lack of intectivy (the most important mistake)
i think that this is the where you made the big mistake...
i mean; it bothers me that only think that you can do is to move (right or left), shoot and dodge...
i would have loved this game if you could duck (and picking up things just when you duck), jump, use items in the envoirement (more than the keys and the elevators) and save the stpupids people there....
also, if you had given this game more interectiva, you would have been able to make this game more dificult... with more than those stupid rousing robots (for exemple, you could avoid different kinds of beams, in diferents kind of ways)...
if you trie to correct this, i'm sure that this game will be one of the best flash games ever
- The controls (see also the first problem)
well... i don't like to press the enter to use an elevator nor using the up button to avoid thinks...
i think that you shoul put another botton to avoid (like the space) and use the up button (or anyother botton, but please, not the enter) to interact with the envoirment and the people (including the elevators) ....
-the speed...
i'm not sure about this... but i found this game a little slow.... maybe... just MAYBE, you should do it faster...
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well, try my advices.... and salu2's