Interesting start
I found that a bit odd but it had promise. It could be quite an entertaining series, keep it up.
Reviews for "Daze of our Lives Ep. 1"
ZOMFG IT WER GOD LYKE
No srsly.
The animation work was ok, if abit choppy at times.
I also lacked a plot from the start, and theres too much filler material.
Add more stuff thats critical for the plot and less "sup" "nm, u" "Nm"
MrBallistic responds:
Check out the new episodes
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i stopped in the beggining wen i herd that guys voice "he had it coming"
wtff i gave u 5btw im sure it is good
MrBallistic responds:
Huh? Well, why did you stop it?
Sorry
But the humor was very bad, the graphics poor, the animation slacky, and the overall cartoon not as good as it could have been.
Not only that but the originality of this cartoon was so lacking that I really hated watching it. Dude look how many cartoons there are with teh same premise as yours: A few guys, all who are a bit nerdy or have some interest in video games, all have corny humor, and who all seem to still be incredibly immature. I didn't like this, I'm sorry.
I would say rewrite the script with some originality, improve the graphics by FAR, and throw down some FUNNY jokes.
The only thing quality wise in this was the sound quality. It was crisp.
Keep on making flash and keep trying. This has potential with changes above ^.
~TheBeagle
P.S.: If you are wondering this is not COMPLETELY horrible. Obviously if it were it would have been blammed. Keep trying man.