Good start
This is a very good first flash, I enjoyed it.
Reviews for "Envy"
decent first attempt
first things first, the animation really wasn't very good at all. The size of the flash was too small, and there wasn't alot going on. The music was quite good, but i think that your filesize was extremely large for relatively poor animation. you need to compress your mp3s in your flash. Also, the moral of the story didn't quite make sense. Otherwise, it was good to see someone trying something different.
Now you're stuck with doing 6 more.
I've cut back my own particapation in the 7 deadly sins to Gluttony and Sloth. I used to do more Lust but it interfered with Sloth.
The Miinimalist style you used was perfect for a first piece. But a little more play with the palette would have made your characters, (flowers?) more visible.
I gave you a 5 for humor, because there's no question mark.
I look forward to seeing more.
Well done, actually...
For a first flash, this was pretty good. Nice job, man
well
i thought it sucked but since everyon else will vote a 5 on it i did 2