Eh, it was so-so
The book and graphics were neat, but the story was way too long and way too sappy. The kid died from a heart attack at 8? Passed out and died? Yeah, ok..........
And then you said that "Joe" himself was going to tell the story, but Joe's dead........kind of hard for that to happen, isn't it? Or was this one of those Ms. Cleo from beyond the grave stories?? LOL
All in all, like I said, the book itself was neat, but the story was rather over the top and boring
Okay, thanks for pointing out all the technical glitches in my story and feel free to tell me how superman shouldn't be able to fly, how santa claus really doesn't exist. Now I can tell you that some people can look past all the things that can't ever happen and have what we like to call an imagination, sorry if yours isn't quite there yet but thanks for the review anyway
Wow. Just wow.
That was amazing. Such a sad story. Almost made me tear up. Great job. I love the idea. Keep up the good work!
Thanks, and glad you enjoyed the idea and this sort of thing
*Sniff sniff* Wow.
Not many flashes like this one appear on Newgrounds and I don't know if that's a bad thing. I was deeply touched by this flash and I even c r i e d a little. When I watched this flash I felt like the world was going to end and you made me realíze something...Hold on let me tell my mom I love her I'll be right back...point taken? I hope this is in the All time Top 50 section real soon. This was just a story right? Good. I'm adding this and you to favs. I look forward to more flashes from you but please make the next one a freakin comedy.
Yeah, it's normally just an full animation or game you see on NG, so I guess people don't normally like things that are different, but I'm just using flash the way I want to use it I guess. lol, well its cool that the flash realized some new things and as for top 50, thats just wishful thinking with the score I got at the moment, so yeah, maybe I should try a comedy instead and see how people warm to that, lol
That was so sad...=(
Im so speechless...I can't even explain how sad that was...
Well I guess speechless was a good thing if you gave me a 10, so thanks for the review =)
Oh My God...
Wow... I can't believe you made me burst out in tears... I thought about if this happened to me... Very great story... and great music for the mood...
Very sad...
Well I guess that is how the story was suppose to work and why I wrote it from the point of view of Joe, but thanks for the compliments