Awesome!
That was poetic. Beautiful. Stunning. Incredible. All the critics shall rave.
A couple of things that brought down the overall score:
1. It was a little short. I know that it was intended to be a test, but it was too *good* to be a test -- but it should've been longer.
2. A preloader and a replay button would've been nice -- or at least a code to loop it back to the beginning of the segment instead of to the first frame. Just a little touch that shows you care.
Otherwise, I really did like this, and I hope you'll use this sequence in a full-length if you don't expand this as a short.