Sounds VERY familiar.
[IF I DIDN'T KNOW IT WAS STOLEN]
Awesome remix I must say. :)
[ACTUAL REVIEW]
You stole the song. It's "Dave Darrel - Children (Club Mix)" but you have cut the song down, changed the pitches, notes, added some stuff and whatsoever so that it was disguised as "your" work. I'm not stupid. Try harder.
To any of you who don't believe me, I suggest you hear the ORIGINAL song yourself. Even the intro progression is the same, just at a different pitch.
Dave Darrel - Children (Club Mix)
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0 Stars for Plagiarism.