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Reviews for "Ragnarok Online D.P. Ep.1"

^^

good flash movie but you might want to improve a few things:

-the maid in the house of the guild guy didnt got a voice, not sure whether thats intended
-please dont use characters shouting the name of the attack they are using, it feels so pokemonlike and thats not a compliment I can tell you. would you shout "9MM BULLET!!" when you shoot someone??

but on the whole its very good movie with the "sentimental" part being better than the fighting scenes, keep up the good work id say

Xionico responds:

she had a voice, but i cant remember why, it wasnt on the final version <.<
well obviously there will be some skills that wont be announced XD, but if you recall almost any cartoon/anime, the skills/techniques arent announced -0-

Good

I have never played Ragnarok but between my friend who was a beta tester and all this stuff on Newgrounds about it, can't help but enjoy the flashes. More voice actors, a tighter story and keeping this style would be great in the second episode, but I doubt it'll be seen within the next few months. Keep it up.

Okay, this is hard.

This is alright. Nto the best BUT the thing is it has so much potential. With some better sound, work on your graphics a bit. And also, the subtitles, don't screw up so much. >.> But it's well made, although it's kinda odd how they're from a prontera guild, when merchant guilds are from Alberta, and mage guild is in Geffen. But, it's all gravy. Keep going, make more.

Xionico responds:

eh damn <.<, i didnt explain that they moved to prontera? darn XD

well thanks for the review =P

Wow...learn some English, man!

I eman, I enjoyed it, because it's based from my favorite MMO, but come on. Proof-reading isn't -that- hard. The voice actors were nice to hear, all except for Ayane. Her voice was so annoying, and she was speaking too directly into the mic. Also, Suscamad is said, "Sus-kah-mod", not "Sus-camid". Also, it's "Muh-Rock", not "More-ruck".

All in all, work on grammar, and word pronunciation.

I stil liked it, though. The way you animate and tell the story is nice, but the spelling threw me off.

Xionico responds:

1.- im stll learning some stuff about english, so ull have to wait till i know it in a perfect way
2.- what makes u think i know how its pronounciated in english >_>?
3.- thanks for the review 0_o

Ultra review +10

W00t, nice movie, the graphics were pretty good. Oh, y veo que eres mexicano, saludos desde Argentina XD. Keep with the good job buddy D:

Xionico responds:

lol seeh, soy mexicano X) thanks for the review XD