Even though it's a bad drawing, you still putted it up for us to see, right? I mean, no one has the balls to do that if they had the chance. However, this was originally a 4 star review, but I decided to put 4.5 stars instead because of the effort.
Also I think the Blue Guy is gonna win.
Reviews for "Battle in Dystopia"
CGA-999 responds:
Thank you for the review!
Nice dude
CGA-999 responds:
Thanks!
Although your not as technical as the rest when it comes to how things look seperately I did enjoy the story you told with this project.
A TRUE illustration.
I liked how you have your own style and your persistence. Also your "IDGAF Imma Release This Shit" attitude is exactly what you need if you want to make it anywhere.
I wouldnt say it sucks, more about it lacking something. I think your lacking a few details (sky, maybe play with a brushes and different textures) but overall, its the simplicity I find beautiful.
This reminded me of Star Wars 3 when Obi Wan and Anakin are bashing lightsabers at eachtother.
LAST THOUGHTS: The way you drew those necks.. are so magnetizing. I cant stop looking at those necks. And correct me if im wrong but I think that dude in the yellow is a bit too excited (;
- Qwaint
CGA-999 responds:
WOW! Thank you sooo much! I am so glad to get feedback, and it is actually good feedback that can help me improve. I say it sucks just so people are more likely to give me super helpful feedback. Thank you!
Your drawing would be very bad by technical standards; However, Bad drawings can still have it's own set of rules and can easily be built upon.
Drawings exist as it's own universe and you have created another plane of existence using your own hands.
Every drawing is an abstract universe created using the human hand.
Train yourself to understand your own drawings in it's own three dimensional universe before advancing onto more polished drawings.
Do the same drawing from other angles.
Can you do that same drawing from other angles?
Could you make that drawing move?
If the drawing is not animated than it would be recommended to exaggerate movements by utilizing an invisible line of action.
Downgrade your drawing style if it helps with learning to better understand your drawings in it's own three dimensional universe.
I've downgraded my drawing style and have animated using stick figures on different alt accounts.
I've recently created part of a VHS draft for a movie called, " Samurai strike force " using stick figures.
I've been working on understanding these sticks in their own universe before advancing onto more polished drawings.
Understanding your own drawings in it's own universe can help you with creating more polished drawings in the future.
I hope this review serves as helpful.
- Termoshockers
CGA-999 responds:
Wow. That was one of my most helpful reviews! Thank you so much!
Even though its not great I still respect the fact that you had the courage to put it up. I like how you used MS paint. I used it before kid pixs came out and then eventually stopped all together. Keep drawing because you'll regret it when you stop, even if you only have MS paint.
CGA-999 responds:
Thank you!