Nothing new or interesting...
...it's all basically ideas from other works of art. Sticks fighting. Sticks fighting with overly realistic guns. The animator getting involved. The animator getting pissed off. Originality? Well it's good if your goofing aroudn trying to learn flash, like me. Whatever.
...KIND OF AVERAGE, SORRY...
When I saw the title of this flash in the 'Top 5 Most Recent Submissions' on the home page of Newgrounds, I thought I was going to be able to make my own story, but no. It was a 'stick figure' animation (I guess you could call them stick figures). The graphics were very average, and the ocean background was kind of stretched, but it still wasn't bad. The text was kind of hard to read on the background sometimes (what the auhour was saying, espeically), and waht the gree stick was saying wa skind of small, but it was read-able (so that's not huge complaint) I like the music, though. Howeve,r you SHOULD have a pre-loader, but at least you had a 'PLAY' and 'REPLAY' buttons. Oh, and what was up with that 'VIEW COMMENTS' thing at the end?
1/5
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well
actually it was not bad,not bad at all!
maybe you could have drawn the sticks better but they look all natural you doing great job,it is not noobish or something like that if any thinks so i can't force any to watch it but i recomend it very much!
keep these flashes coming i'm really tended to watch all your coming flashes,maybe you will make a new whole style!?
it was so good and i could giggle a little to and cool effect with that he did erease that wound and they could attack again and the creator was also good(you and him) the grammaty was good i am not a big fan of it but i have never complained i would be intrested if you would make a mix of that in the kind of ''fight scene'' they will be sticks but then more nearby they was human with flesh.i can see you are very much of a uhhh action like person but while on the way funny the movie it self had great potential i didn't expect this to be this good even if it was front page the beginning made me a little suspesios but you made me regret that!if you'll stop flash thats okay but then i'll loose a good memory.it is wierd i have never felt like this for a flash,you must have done something special with this keep this good work coming hope to see more
BYE!
---Vonkreig---
ps:i would give it higher score and if you wonder why i did write that much interactivity it was i've got something very very special by this i dunno what it is:P
you making me feel gooooood
im glad i can make a special feeling with just a flash movie
im sure going to make a sequel of this one!
guys thanks for the feedback!!
A different take on stickfigures
That was kind of different for a stickfigure fighting flash thingy. Though the creator's text blended in with the tree in the background, and the guy's text was too small to easily read.
Not bad
I though it was pretty good, nice sound effects, the only the you should work on is making your text not blend in with the background.