ok
i liked the clay mation, you couldve done a little better on the sound but it was good
Reviews for "Rhapsody In Hell"
Good Start
I have done these types of animations so heres some advice.
1. Take your time-you must take your time when making your changes so it isn't chopy. Be patient and go slow.
2. Still camera- Do not move the camera unless needed. Doing this will help keep flow to the movie and cut out some of the chop.
3. Light- try to keep a constant strength of light, plain and simple.
4. Life like- try moving the legs of the peole insead of having them slide around, it looks wierd. This takes extra time but is worth it in the end.
5. There is no 5
6. Same as 5
It was still a pretty good movie just take your time and work on the details. Nice Start!
Lord-Henry responds:
At first it was pretty smooth, but unfortuntly i had to downgrade it so i could put it on newgrounds
not really flash...
this is a flash site, this isent flah =-\
Lord-Henry responds:
True, but newgrounds still excepts claymation for some reasons (ever herd a' knox)?
Not bad for a first timer
I do have some advice for you because this animation is terribly choppy. Make sure you don't move the camera when taking pictures and make sure you block the light from the windows because sunlight does tend to change intensity and it will affect your animation. For this last part of my advice..........BE PATIENT!!! Your going to have to capture every single movement in the body parts. The smaller the moves, the less choppy the animation.
meh
i didnt like it much, but i know this isnt ur best cuz this was for school and school wont let anything good in there =) i hope u do better next time though
Lord-Henry responds:
Haha, thanks i guess