Generally bad . . .
Although that can be said of any sprite movie, this was generally unamusing, disjointed, and generally low in quality. This will undoubtedly pass judgement, seeing as video game parodies and sprite movies will always score much higher than they should, but that, by no means makes it a coherent submission or deserving of a place on Newgrounds. If I were you, I'd open up flash, and start to practice drawing, until I was capable of creating something original.