Apart from the screwed up lip-sync, facial expressions, and the stuttering (not that I have anything against it, I also stutter), it's not bad.
Reviews for "A review by Eric Bauman"
Needs improvements
I think you should get him to lip sync and it wouldn't hurt to have him hold a bag of stolen money and his watermark. I put a ten for violence because listing to Eric's voice made me want to kill myself! Overall I thought it was OK but needs some improvements. Remember he didn't deny the male prostitutes! 2/5
lame
I can't beleive you made an account just to make a crappy cartoon that had some of the worst lipsyncing of all time this was perhaps the worst cartoon i ever saw
Ummm....wow...
First, lip synch. Use it. Dont just make one symbol and use it the entire movie. Second, lets try using different scenes instead of just a guy with the same mouth movements with text going about the screen. I also dont know why this is trying to get into the Lemon Demon section, when it has nothing to do with it.
Poor
I found the video to be poor. I've seen the video and understood it fully. I thought the mouth effects were really bad and why did they keep going. It seems like you didn't try to synchronize it at all. 2/5 4/10.