Not bad, pretty short but good
Get a story behind this and it will be great.
Not bad, pretty short but good
Get a story behind this and it will be great.
A decent start
Well, not terrible for a test run. The fart joke was a bit repetitive for the length of the flash, but if you plan on making this into a series, I'm sure you'll have many more ideas on what you plan on having your character do. This could very well have potential to go somewhere. Anyway, I think it shows some potential. Oh, and an idea: put a dunce cap on the rabbit, just for shits and giggles.
Got Potential?
Just so you know, I think it does have potential. Now bring us more.