Bizzar
Dude, nice graphics- but that was just.......weird! Try to stay off the crack rock huh?
Reviews for "Takabus"
Awesome style...
...get and interesting story and you'll have something. Keep 'em coming!
That was just dumb. In a bad way.
What was the point of that? The beginning especially pissed me off... it didn't make sense, it was drawn shitty, and whoever did the voice did a horrible job. He's supposed to be yelling, but he's nowhere close. The only decent part was the Unicorn part, and that was surrounded by garbage. It's not bad because it's random. I've seen plenty of random flash that were good, but this definitely isn't one of them. The only good thing about this flash, besides the decent unicorn thing, was its length. It was bad, but it didn't waste much of my time.
Next time you do something random, be sure the random things you put into it are actually worth seeing. And work on the voice acting, that was pathetic. Get the voice acting quality to match the visuals and you'll be in business. Keep trying.
Mouflon responds:
The voice in the beginning is a spontaneous recording from a friend of mine. But perhaps you're still right that it doesn't match. Thank you, Rob, SO MUCH for this feedback <3
uncalled for.
im almost wrote this off as a davis firth rip-off becaus of that first bit
What the hell was that?
The anatomy of the girl was bad...she looked like a man in some shots, and the whole thing just had no sense and no point.
Mouflon responds:
I've heard other people question her anatomy from behind so yeah I'll have to look into that. I'm not very skilled in drawing natural shapes since I haven't done it very much before. Thanks for the feedback