It was good
You could have made it larger and with a better storyline, but this as a short is well animated and its quite funny. Keep up the good work, you really can animate in flash!
Reviews for "Mummy"
Coaly responds:
Yeah, I guess next time I'll plan crap out and stuff, thanks for the compliment and the review.
Decent Submission
Your animation was decent, and the sound was quite good. You obviously have to work on imporivng the graphics and flow, possibly lengthing it a bit. I daubt this go aorudn will survive, but with improvement it coudl wrk.
Coaly responds:
Thanks for the review, or whatever.
HA!
hilarious. i 5's that MF. i loved the simplistic yet somehow complex art style. voices were decently well done. everything was ship-shape. pwn-tastic!
Coaly responds:
thanks for the really nice review.
shorter and sweeter
----- Starts automatically. You should always at least have a play button at the start. It can be a minor inconvenience and there's no reason for it.
++ Kinda amusing
--- A lot of it seems to drag. We know where the plot's going, we know what's gonna happen... you just drag it out by repeating what's already happened or having them repeat lines.
+++ I do really love the animation of him pointing, then having his arms twist round.
++ Decent voices.
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It was fairly interesting, with an amusing concept, but the script and movie could've been cut for a shorter and sweeter animation.
Coaly responds:
I actually did cut some. Your comments are noted, thanks for the detailed review.
new ideas are always welcome
I have never seen a flash like this before. The style was top knotch and the graphics were good, but felt a wee bit shifty at moments, but it's probably something not to be concerned about. The sound is pretty good and comes out quite clearly. Interactivity gets a full 10 because of the control bar at the bottom, it is nice to have that kind of control. It was funny, not crap your pants funny, but funny non-the-less. Keep up the good work.
Coaly responds:
Yeah I guess I better write down my lines next time, thanks for the review.