meh
could be better,the animation was kind of choppy, it should be more fluid.you should set it to a higher frame rate
Reviews for "Lines Collab"
good start
It seems that all of the authors are fairly new to animating. I like the idea that you use a collab to practice, but in all of honesty it wasn't a good one. It sort of hurt my eyes trying to make out what was the line and what was the BG. Plus you mostly just used black, the lines din't move too smoothly, and it was nothing but lines, not really any recognizable shapes. Im sorry to say that it's not a good animation, but it is a good start. Keep practicing on your own then wait a while for another collab. I don't doubt that some good animation could come out of you in the future.
For what it's worth..
+ It had some idea (not new but idea anyways)
- Make a working [Play] button, shouldn't be too hard
- If this really is a collab, it would help to inform the viewer about who has done what part of it
yeah... this was...
...mildly interesting...
try improving the animation style or come up with something that has a storyline... then I think you'd do better
3/10
2/5
Okay, but...
It looked more like a practice-in-flash than an actual cartoon. It was done well, just not really entertaining.