Ok
That was ok but a little too short
Reviews for "Waiter"
Coaly responds:
indeed, it was short
Just one problem.
The only problem I saw with your submission is that your submission didn't play immediatly after loading. Some people might just outright blam your submission just for that. A preloader with a "play" button should take care of that. As for your submission, this was a good effort for a first submission, with decent graphics, and sound. You do have potential. Keep up the good work.
Coaly responds:
That's a good point I guess. I'm not like...bad at flash by the way...I can animate pretty well actually, I did this in like two days, for a little fun.
Ok
a little bit too short, but at least i found it funny. good job
Coaly responds:
thanks, I know it's short, I just did it for the hell of it.
6.5
In this movie, a customer just can't seem to get enough from his waiter and the waiter just can't wait to to not wait on the customer. I have to say, the idea is funny. Having a customer be so annoying that the waiter just can not take it anymore - seems very realistic. The character designs are simple and could use a little touching up and improving - but seem to be better than I expected. I like the voice, the sound sound effects work well. A nice short film, keep up the good work.
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Coaly responds:
Thanks for the review, I know it could be more, but it isn't...so oh well. Golly gee I sure will keep up the good work though mister :D
umm huh....
yea well its a start? just try to make stuff more.. better :D
Coaly responds:
yeah I know it isn't amazing, I can do better stuff than this...if you trust me. Thanks for the review anyhow.