Very, very nice.
I've seen a lot of bad movies today so imagine my relief when I watched your movie!
I can tell you've actually put effort into this movie which, in my books, deserves a WELL DONE! I've added you to my favourite authors list so I'll be waiting for your next submition!
You asked for advise so... I guess you could try more with the lip syncing. The way that the mouths just move when there’s speech is alright but actual lip syncing would be nice :)