Wow
First off I have to say I knew the character on the right was just like me the instant he said "Dwarf" right away as his race without hearing anything. That's exactly me, dude.
This was a rare gem of writing that is least often submitted on Newgrounds. Even middleschool kids today can be cranking out incredible animation and drawing, but what is absolutely consistent with Newgrounds today is a plethora of deplorable writing from the lowest rated crap to even the Top 50. Every series is full of plot-holes, lame cliche's, and mimicking every other cartoon they watch religiously. I sincerely laughed dozens of times throughout this one flash, and I still have the rest of them to watch. And let me tell you, it's hard to get me to laugh out loud more than once watching anything, including paid written shows on TV. The scene with the character having sex in the bar was enough alone to make me review this as 10.
I think it's obvious at this point what quality I think is your strongest. I really think with your writing and someone's artistry skills who's not so great at writing, you guys could make someone that would sit at the top of the top-50 list indefinitely.
Also one more thing: your Magikarp flash is so hilarious, it's become something of an inside joke between my friends and I whenever pokemon comes up in conversation. Sorry to read you're dissapointed about how people don't appreciate your other things and just want Magikarp, but it was really clever for a one-time deal. If it helps, consider me a fan of your series and one who appreciates the level of work it takes to make something worthy of your standards. Writing 15 minutes of jokes that you know all are funny is hard work.
Cheers