Reviews for Platform Game Maker

[Masterwabbit]

One suggestion.

I couldn't find anyway for the character to jump. If it was in there, I'm just not observant enough. If it wasn't, add it in next time. Makes it a bit easier to build a complex level.

[Yiffy]

Not mutch to do.

The main problem with this game is, the character is large, the world is small.
This game would've been so mutch better if the character was small and if you could have multiple screens (using teleports to travel from one to another), instead of just one plain screen.
Another great thing would be NPC's and Enemies.
Players would be able to make NPC's say things to people, trigger things, or anything like that.
Enemies could make a threat to the player, more of a threat than just flames, lava and spikes.
And go on... I hope you expand this game, because this can be so mutch better.

Grapics - 7
Nice varity of tiles and backgrounds make a good game.

Style - 7
Make your own platformer! it still lacks thing though, but it can be still realy fun.

Sound - 7
A varity of sound tracks, no SFX.

Violence - 4
Not mutch violence at all, only the player dieing.

Interactivity - 8
Make your verry own platformer, lots of combinations, but can use some more stuff though.

Humor - 0
No humor.

[Xorberax]

Heres my level Dungeon Force and Deep Sea

Deep Sea

1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1
,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,24,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,
1,1,9,9,9,1,24,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,24,1,1,
1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,24,24,24,24,24,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1
,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1
,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1
,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,33,1,1,1,1,1,3,3,8,8,
8,8,8,8,24,24,24,8,8,15,2,15,24,24,24,24,2,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1
,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,25,25,25,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,
1,32,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,28,15,15,15,27,1,1,1,1,1,3,3,3,1,1,1,1,1,
1,1,28,14,14,14,27,1,1,1,2,2,2,2,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1
,1,1,24,24,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,24,24,1,1,1,1
,6,6,6,27,24,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,24,24,24,24,24,1,6,6,6,27,1,2
4,15,15,15,15,15,15,15,15,25,25,25,25,25,25,25,25,25,25,25,2
5,14,14,14,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,1,1,1,1,1,10,9,297.2,68.65,34
7.85,479.55

Dungeon Force

1,26,26,26,26,26,26,26,26,26,26,33,6,6,6,33,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1
,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,33,6,6,6,33,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,33,
6,6,6,33,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,33,6,6,6,33,1,1,1,1,1
,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,33,6,6,6,33,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1
,1,33,6,6,6,33,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,15,15,15,15,24,24,24,24,30,30
,30,1,1,1,1,1,1,33,33,33,14,14,14,14,24,26,1,24,1,1,1,1,1,1,
1,1,1,6,6,6,14,14,14,14,24,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,6
,33,33,24,1,1,1,1,29,29,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,6,33,1,24,1,1,1,
32,15,15,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,6,33,33,24,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,
1,1,1,1,1,1,6,6,6,24,24,29,24,1,1,1,1,1,1,33,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,6
,6,6,15,15,27,1,1,1,1,1,32,15,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,24
,24,24,15,15,15,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,14,14,1,33
,1,1,1,33,33,33,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,20,33,33,33,20,20,
20,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,33,33,33,33,21,20,20,20,21,21,21,21,21,
21,20,20,20,21,21,21,20,20,20,20,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,
21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,1,1,1,1,1,4,4,383.85,
159.85,463.75,476.15

[RealRevenge]

Not to bad.

Not to bad at all, some areas can be improved...

Anyway heres my Level.

Accuracy Maze
1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,
1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,
1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,16,1,1,1 ,1,1,1,1,1,10,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,
1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,16,1,1,1 ,16,16,16,1,1,1,1,16,16,16,16,
16,16,1,1,16,16,16,1,1,1,28,16 ,1,1,1,1,1,16,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,
1,1,1,1,28,16,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,
1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,28,16,1,1,
1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,29 ,1,28,16,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,16,16 ,16,25,16,16,16,16,16,16,16,16 ,1,1,1,1,1,16,16,16,16,27,1,1,
1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,
1,16,27,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,
1,1,1,1,1,1,1,16,27,1,1,1,1,1,
1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,16,2 7,1,1,1,16,16,16,16,16,16,16,1 6,1,1,1,24,24,24,24,16,1,29,1,
25,26,30,30,30,30,30,30,30,1,1 ,1,25,25,25,25,16,25,16,1,16,1 ,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,32,16,16,16 ,16,27,16,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,
1,1,1,32,16,16,16,16,27,27,1,1 ,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,16,16 ,16,16,27,27,1,1,1,1,29,29,29,
29,29,29,29,29,25,25,16,16,16,
16,16,16,16,16,16,16,16,16,16,
16,16,16,16,16,16,16,16,16,16,
16,16,16,16,16,16,16,16,16,16,
16,16,16,16,16,16,16,1,1,1,1,1 ,2,9,327.55,96.8,494.15,508.8

[NewgroundsKate]

Great job!

a veary goob game! I'm lovin' it...