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+COMMENTS+:
Well, I guess the song was pretty good, and the graphics and style were pretty good, too. This had an emotional impact on me, sort of.
+IMPROVING+:
Well, near the end, what happened? Was that girl in a play or something? Also, I felt that the end pretty much completely ruined the whole mood of the flash. Also, as the last reviewer wrote, it cuts off too abruptly.
2/5