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^^Good Points^^
Interesting storyline. It gave you a lot of options of what to make out of the storyline. The graphics were the best part of this. I liked the text box you chose, and the drawings were pretty fair. Not bad music either.
^^Needs Improving^^
I was quite disappointed with this movie. BBQBeef going deaf has to be one of the better ideas for a movie that I've heard of, yet you did nothing with it. Your character came up to his window, shouted some mean things at him then left. I was totally surprised that that was the end, and very disappointed at the same time.