Good start
Given that this is under development it looks like you have a good start. But might I recommend that you give a movement list so we know how to interact with the game. Anything I could probably critique right now is probably something that your already aware of, so I'll just leave it at "this is a good start". My overall score might be a little high, but I'd really like to see this one in it's complete stage.
Instructions!!
Never, ever submit a game to the portal without instructions in it, whether the game is done or not. Other than that it seems like you have a good start.
Um good try
Now this will probably get blammed but i hope not as with a lot and i mean a lot of improvment this game could really shine
WELL DONE!
Some improvement needed
This game has great graphics but overall there isnt reallymuch to do.
I suggest putting in some objectives or something.
Eh, style is great.
Style isnt the only component of a game. I think the fact you can send messages to people is cool.. but i dont like the fact that you start the game surrounded by ogres. Makes things a little more... logical. Like i said, +10 for the spiffyness of gadgets you added. To bad they couldnt be used to their full potential.