Interesting and humorous, but a little slow.
Nice animation and visuals, but this clip moves a little slow.
The humor was good- some rather funny parts (fan girls gone wild), but again, the pace of the movie was just too slow to be effective. You might try to cut a little time out of some of the scenes and see if it works better.
Overall, I would say this was entertaining.
I think it would flow faster if i had voice acting, I left it slow to make sure people had enough time to read things... which really slows down the pace of things unfortunately.
:)
Nice artwork! I like the comic book style, too. The "complaint" scene cracked me up to no end.
One question: what font did you use for the speech balloons?
Going to check out your other work now... great job.
I used Anime Ace, its a free font avaible on a number of font sites.
Thanks!! ^^
so were they like gay?
were L and Ratio gay?
i just kinda got the vibe with the alone time and the 'imagination of nakedness' thingys that they were gay. or one of them was a girl with tiny tits.
anyways, yeah you need a voice actor, I'd do it but my mic sucks and i have a high pitched voice lol.
I liked the art but the animation wasn't so good, it was good enough just the movie didn't rely on animation much more of the art, you wouldnt' really notice unless you tried to notice, i hada stop the movie to read his rant i wanted to hear what he had to say lol, would been hilarious if you had a gay guy read that entire line while everyone stared at him I think.
anyways good flash, gave it 5/5 so it'd get threw but normally woulda given it a 4/5 so feel good for the free high rating lol.
I just recommend you do a 'liiiiiiittle' mor animation and find some voice actors then i wouldn't have had a problem with it
L and Ratio are not actually gay, there is just a lot of gay fan art of them... you know how those fan girls are.
I am will aware of the lack of animation... its cause i'm lazy, and drawing people is difficult for me. haha.
thanks
Yay! It's Raito and L!
Alright! Those two always make for funny flashes. But I have to say - It's not really as good as the "Snape's Love Potion" short. Possibly because of the length.
Still, High score for you! :3
Yes far cry from being as good as "snape's love potion." I love her gdd's stuff. She's a big influence, and primary reason for all my death note fan art.
Thanks.
Haha, I like it :)
Funny, and personally Ive watched gay manga and anime so this isnt anything obscene.
^_^ Nice flash, maybe a bit more action, (as in, the people move)
And less black screenes, but besides that, I really like it!
Its not obsecene, wasn't trying to be, but there are lots of homophobic males at there that flinch at the mere mention of two males together... So I thought i'd make the contents clear, so they know what they're getting into.
Yep, do need more movment, lazy me. :)
Thanks.