So very confuzing...
I think it went way to fast... I was totaly lost. You should try slowing it down... um nice job...
Reviews for "super bunny one"
FireNuke responds:
thats what i stand for, random fast and weird
Erm
The bunny's voice cracked me up, but other than that it was confusing. I don't think it was meant to be random. I believe the plot was supposed to be understandable, but it failed.
Probability of it staying on NG: 40%
FireNuke responds:
2.5090 / 5.0000
40% ey?
there is potential there, but it needs work
You have a concept, similar to a lot of things which have gone before. while it is a tried and tested formula, you need something to make yours stand out as unique compared to the others
Your graphics are quite poor, like people have said, it looks like you're using mspaint! Spend a bit more time tidying these up and rendering them to give yourself an edge graphics wise.
The voices you used are adequate, but not enough on there own. try a little mood music, something tense but fast for fighing scenes, something positive for the scene where the bad guy ends up in jail (no, Final fantasy victory music is not acceptable here)
And finally give the story a little more depth, what did the bad guy do to be bad, did he kidnap the woman, it wasn't clear? If he did, why did he do it? give the characters some depth, you might want to break a story like that into sections.
I know you named this super bunny one, but there is too much content for it to be just part of a series, and there isn't enough detail for it to be a film in it's own right.
Hope that helps a little, as well as confusing, it's confusing me and I'm the one writing it!
FireNuke responds:
cant be arsed explain plot in fla
hes a bastard called the vicius vet, he mega breeded the hamster, hearing a cry for help sb flew to the rescue were he owned the vv
lol
lol ur right there prob is only 2 peeps that care ill give u a 1 cuz it was funny to see him light up like a firework
FireNuke responds:
either your an idiot who thinks one is good, or your an asehole and i dont exactly care for your offencive reviwe
Ok.
Why did the scientist guy grab the bunny by his weiner and throw him across the room, and what's with the crappy rock rendition of the mega man music?
FireNuke responds:
sorry i ment to say that replie ot you not the guy after you, that guy recognised talent, you on the other hand are worthless