Not too shabby!
I agree, work on the look of the cartoon a little more. You've got alot of potential with this series! I really loved the goth 'blending' bit! That was truly funny! I'll be looking forward to seeing future episodes of this!
Reviews for "Goth Lyfe 1: Intro"
Didn' you people Read the description
In the description it went over how they know this isn't how real goths act and that they are just joking around with the whole thing.
So if you are gona give sme critisizim make sure that you do youre homework.
I also think that the graphics need a little tweaking up. Oh and there is a Goth Lyfe episode 2 now if you wana cheek it out.
~REVIEW~
I'm not too sure about the graphics, very smudgy around the edges. The animation is also not very good, some of it definitely looks tweened. Well it's just an intro so it doesn't really matter that much.
Introduces all the "Goth" kids
This animation paints an skewed view of the Goth community. Being Goth, I am offended. The archetype painted in this animation is an emo kid. Emo kids are the scum of the earth. THEY blend into the scenery. THEY have hair that hangs in front of one eye. And THEY wish to die. Goths on the other hand are the original dark wonder. We do not talk about our therapy or how the world rejects us. In fact, very few of us go to therapy or have plans to kill ourselves. It is my personal opinion that we are in fact some of the worlds most well accepted, and well adjusted people. Do not let my angry rant confuse you, we are really very nice people, and are poorly reflected in this animation. If they edit the title to "Emo Lyfe," it would be a very funny show. in essence, this is a good little animation. It's very funny. It's just misinformed.
errr
This blows......a lot. the drawing need to more than what it. but it made laugh a little so 7/10