dont take none of this personally
since its just a review.
i see you know your theory very well....and im very sorry to tell you, thats all i can give you.
all your synths are presets in the FL 5 sytrus VST and the samples are FL 5 presets, and you didnt even FX the drums/piano.
it made it seem so...empty to me, when i hear those damned samples or presets again.
my suggestion:
find a site where you can buy techno/trance samples
buy them
try em out, it will make your songs 10X better, and another thing, try making your own instruments.
z3n0n--_--