not bad
This was interesting, nice style, good pace - only reason it's getting a six and not a nine is because its "to be continued" and was therefore too short to have any real plot.
not bad
This was interesting, nice style, good pace - only reason it's getting a six and not a nine is because its "to be continued" and was therefore too short to have any real plot.
Nice try, Strawberry.
We all know it's you posing as someone else.