You got the prot point. Grats.
Not too much to write home about though, and a couple things went wrong that dropped this score about three points lower than it could've been.
The play button didn't work. Check that, because the viewer having to right click + hit Play leaves a REALLY bad first impression no matter how good the flash is.
The Pallet scene took a really long time for what was basically the dude walking down to the shore. Crank up the FPS there and try having him walk the short way instead of around Oak's lab, so that we're not staring at a guy blankly walking for any longer than necessary and you get to the sweet stuff sooner.
What worked? The fight was good and brought a smile or two, and opening the bag and seeing junk, crap, and a dead baby was a kick. Fix the play button and have less walking, and it's a decent short.