Reviews for Mario bloopers (MS)

[ILikeToast3rs]

Not bad.

Pretty decent flash.
There were a couple spelling errors I coulden't tell if they were accidents or on purpose. If it was on purpose try doing stuff like having the letter short out or dissapear or fall off.
Graphics-5 It was a sprite, what can i say.
Style-5 You had some pretty distinct style but it still needed a little more flavor. You had the Food but not the L33t S4uc3.
Sound-2 You had the mario music, but most mario flashes have that, at least they should. What gave you the 2 insted of 1 were the other sounds, and the "America" song at the end.
Violence-3 Mario got smashed or destroyed a couple times.
Interactivity-1 It had a "PLAY" button. Lol
Humor-3 Kindve funny.

Overall-4 Pretty good. You did a pretty good job for your first submitted flash.

[Lockdude]

hmmm.... good sprite animation

the sprite animation was good, and it was a good effort for 5 days, but the jokes weren't funny, why did mario just all of a sudden fall over when he got to windows, and when you first showed the castle you couldn't see what it said for thta split moment. Things randomly falling on people are funny unless they are unexpected. I think you humour needs improving but the rest was good. Unfortuently since humour was the whole point of this I think it will get blammed, although i have seen much worse on newgrounds.

Also the preloader was messed up, gotta fix it.