I really enjoyed that
That was REALLY good for your first flash! ^^ Extra points for that.
I gave you a 4 =)
Reviews for "Tosti Trieout"
Migel responds:
Thanks,
But this means my next flash needs to get better ...hum id better start right away then :D
Very good
I really like it, its pretty funny and entertaining. You need to improve some little things, but its good, yeah =)
Suggestions? ... hmm... add a preloader, work more in graphics and try to add some colours and backgrounds...
but good work !!!!! =D
Migel responds:
Thank u for ur review and I will trie to follow up ur suggestions.
it was a good start
I like the premise of the story, and the comical way the protagonist refers to toast as his "tosti" and does the little "woowoowoo" thing, lol. And although I'm the last one who has any business saying Naruto music is overdone (*cough*seeNinjaMario*cough*) I still think it might have been better if you'd chosen another kind of music. :P Maybe something with a more metal feel to it.
The sketches were good, but they were just that, sketches. You ought to put more effort into it and incorporate complete characters and colors into your movie. It's just not a complete movie yet. ;) Still, it made me laugh, so you get brownie points for that. :P
Migel responds:
hehe oh well getting a 5 from the maker of ninja mario is not that bad. Anyways I still wanted to get to know flash and I never drew anything before so basicly this was really scary for me :P. Im more of a animation fan than a animator :P
Weak...
Art - was a low quality storyboard at best
Animation - might as well have been at 4 fps on a single layer.
voice acting - well below average
soundfx - not half bad
humour - straight up awful
I would understand the quality of this piece if you had spent an hour on it. If you spent more, maybe you should read up on some flash tutorials, drawing concepts and rehearse your joke.