legacyyyy ^^
enjoyed it alot migel..
and dont forget, its your legacyyy ^^
grtz,
Vance
Reviews for "Tosti Trieout"
Migel responds:
Yo thnx man, Vance ;P
Seems although I get quite good reviews the score doesnt get over the 3 :(
Wtf? XD
Wow. That was....random. XD You're off to a good start. Very nice. Very odd. hahaha. Good job!
Migel responds:
Thnx I hope I can keep it up :P
it was a good start
I like the premise of the story, and the comical way the protagonist refers to toast as his "tosti" and does the little "woowoowoo" thing, lol. And although I'm the last one who has any business saying Naruto music is overdone (*cough*seeNinjaMario*cough*) I still think it might have been better if you'd chosen another kind of music. :P Maybe something with a more metal feel to it.
The sketches were good, but they were just that, sketches. You ought to put more effort into it and incorporate complete characters and colors into your movie. It's just not a complete movie yet. ;) Still, it made me laugh, so you get brownie points for that. :P
Migel responds:
hehe oh well getting a 5 from the maker of ninja mario is not that bad. Anyways I still wanted to get to know flash and I never drew anything before so basicly this was really scary for me :P. Im more of a animation fan than a animator :P
Heh, nice way of looping it.
I liked it, but only thing wrong was the voice acting. SKREAM into the mic when the character echos 'toasti', that way it'll sound more dramatic.
Like Darth Vader, 'No.' wouldn'tve worked in place of 'NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO0000()()oooOOOOOO!!!111ONE', now would it?
x1
Migel responds:
Yeh ur right :P, but this was originally made for friends and my voice acting was always bad so thats why putted it out even more :D
Very good
I really like it, its pretty funny and entertaining. You need to improve some little things, but its good, yeah =)
Suggestions? ... hmm... add a preloader, work more in graphics and try to add some colours and backgrounds...
but good work !!!!! =D
Migel responds:
Thank u for ur review and I will trie to follow up ur suggestions.