Reviews for Saint - Chapter 2

[Gutwrenchinggore]

wait, what?

Well done on the graphical part of this toon, but the story seemed really forced to me. First theres knights templar, good beginning, it worked for davinci code. but then he turns into a holy vigilante, but he becomes forgiving and has sex with a chick, but she goes away for some reason, so he then devotes his life to peace. but unfortunately for him, the world has other ideas, and lo and behold. ZOMBIES.

as i said. Forced.

and the narrators voice was inconsistent, it started irish for some reason, and then settled into something i can only describe as DBZ voice. Very gutteral, mainly.

Anyhoo, overall i'd say this is an adequate toon.

TheZebu responds:

HA.... yeah, I hate to admit it, but you're right.

(No sex, by the way. And she didn't leave.)

[Alabaster67]

nice

this series looks pretty badass so far, good work. the storyline is very well thought out, and the prologue really helped shed some light the concept of this flash. looking forward to the sequals.

[I-N-D-U-S-T-R-Y]

constructive criticism

2 things jumped out at me: anatomy, and timing

your animation, while strong lacks structure, and it seemed like the charachters were all over the place anatomically. id suggest taking some classes or just doing some practice with drawing from life

you also didnt really que up the music to the events and added charachters with no explanation... try watching some movies and looking at how the director uses timing to build suspense

overall, good, but im sure you couldve made it better

[K-Devil]

I had trouble understanding because of the voice

i dunno, it was like he was mumbling and stuff. sometimes too quiet. nice drawings that u did, but i agreed with some of the people that there wasn't really any animation, mostly pictures and stuff.

[HarlequindeRustre]

Good to know...

This is a good premise and a good art style. Just work on the voice-acting a bit more; half the time, they sound like they're choking on a burger.

I see that you're hinting at your previous works, which is an interesting development, and sure to please. Let me know if there is any sort of help the reviewer can be....