Heh
I laughed. That's all i can say really, i think you can do better though.
Reviews for "TooF Bad Breath"
Pretty good start!
I liked this! A rather crude, but funny alternative cause of bad breath! I can't find anything neccessarily wrong with this, but I dunno, something wasn't quite working in the dialogue department. The flow wasn't quite there with the censor bleeps to make their usage humerous enough. Still, overall i enjoyed this! Good work!
MACception responds:
:D Thanks. I think I just needed somewhere to go after this one...and I found it ;)
good...
dude this is good enough but i know you already realesed toof five(which rocked!) but like make them go on 4 longer.
hmm
Solid toof kicks everyones ass! good but should be longer .
I guess the set up was pretty good, but it was too short. It was just mouth parts talking about farting. There should have been more. Still, I guess it was at least unique. I probably say that too much. That doesn't make it good.
I do like the voices. I'd probably get offended too if people said that about my farts. So that's where we get bad breath? Do the teeth themselves have teeth? I mean, they have mouths.
MACception responds:
Lol, thanks. I made this a long, long time ago... Not my proudest work :P