Animation
Pretty Funny though you need to work on your animation a bit more. But good story line
Reviews for "The Adventures of Steve 1"
you and by asosiation everyone you love is stupid
it seemed like it relied too much on animation which wasn't very good in this particular movie. Not enough joke there was one I think were he knocked over something with his penis, the rest were just VG parodies, which didn't make fun of so much as show a character from your flash in place of Resident Evil, and Ryu.
Plus what was up with Steve's voice it sounded all funny like it was from another country or something. Does the porno Shctick come from real life? If it does then your real life is as dissinteresting as this cartoon. Well you probably want to get back to your porno of Resident Evil having sex with street fighter so I bid you a-chatka.
Neo-Egyptian responds:
I guess the aim of this review was to piss me off or stop me making other Steve animations, but after so much praise for this cartoon from so many different people (thanks everyone!) the last opinion I'm going to listen to is that of a guy who can't spell words like 'association'.
Oh, and your unintentionally hilarious insult that suggests I watch 'porno of Resident Evil having sex with street fighter' shows you're either mentally handicapped, or about five years old.
Take your pick!
boooooooring
Plase make it more interesting.
sadness
The only thing sadder than someone making this is that its actually doing well on Newgrounds. Everybody's voting low-brow these days. As far as tech goes, crappy lipsynching and off proportion characters but in that fun Ren and Stympy kinda way, just badly drawn anime. Sound was muddled too.
Neo-Egyptian responds:
To be perfectly honest, while I'm trying to derive some kind of useful criticism from your post, I'm failing. Calling an animation 'anime' because some of the characters very vaguely resemble those sorts of characters, when the actual plot/dialogue/setting has nothing to do with anime whatsoever, is somewhat misinformed.
But hey, thanks for the comment about off-proportion characters, I'll work on that.
Horrible. Absolutely horrible.
Don't even waste your time on the next episode of this flash series. The animation was choppy, the part where steve had a boner was so unrealistic that I had to laugh at your stupidity of a flash artist. Work on the animation being more realistic and the sound being clearer and make the sound match the mouth making it, you also had dry humor in the submission. Don't just use your voice for all the characters. If you need a reference watch the flash movie "The Yuyu", it will show you what the potential of flash is. Otherwise for humor, look at the flash "Decline of Videogaming 1-3". Look at "MGS3: Crab Battle" for sound, graphics, and the gore of flash.