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Reviews for "<MWA> Subtle"

Enjoyable

I really like this loop, but it does not loop very well. It kind of jumps at the very end which makes it kind of screwy. Also the drums could be a tad bit louder. But other than that, I liked everything. I enjoyed the synth and the instrument that was making the "pop" like sound (I don't know how to describe it xP).

So overall, its a cool little loop. I'll listen to it while working on school work. This kind of stuff helps me stay focused :P

5/5

mjattie responds:

you're right about that :)

thanks for the 9/10

sweet

nice job! haven't been to ng to see the work here in a while, and im glad to come back and find quality ;) i love the melody with the drone in the back, rocking back and forth but flowing nonetheless... sounds very thoughtful and nostalgic. i like.

some constructive criticism:

the synth line is cheesy and out of place. i'd choose somethign either more subdued or organic.

the beat does a good job with the piano. you've got the feel of this contest in the bag :D though you might want to make it a bit calmer and simpler--the hats cutting in and out and it's almost tumultuous feel work initially, but get tiring after a bit.

hope i helped!
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if you wish, check out my latest; i havent been back for a while. cheers.

mjattie responds:

hey, p4c...

About the synth: I guess you're right. I might change the freq automation in a volume automation and the synth patch in a string patch :)

(You don't wanna know how many times I've randomized the volume of the drums xD, so they're a bit tiring...)

I'll check your song out, either tonight, or tomorrow: I don't have a decent sound system here, so I'll misjudge it....

Really nice

It was getting hot inside, but I didn't wanna take my sweater off because that would mean taking my headphones off for a moment :P

mjattie responds:

haha, well, that's very kind of you XD

but, the song isn't walking away, so just put you sweather off :P

Loved the loop, waiting for the full ;]

Not sure if it should go under "Jazz", but nicely done indeed. Again, I would very like to hear a extended version. ^^

mjattie responds:

well, it's not classical, so you could say it's miscellaneous, but I find the piano jazzy enough.

I will extend it a bit but not much ;)

It is surely jazzy

9/10 5/5

Sounds a bit like sting

Good!

Please return the favor on my first classical piece: Going home

mjattie responds:

thanks, I did ;)