i see potential...
this could be a nice series. It be neater to have a talk show like set up with a host to define your series(a logo, special things the host does, ext.) But yeah, stick to it and this could go places.
Reviews for "VG:BTP commercial v2"
supersonic4336 responds:
I'm going for something like the show Biography. This took awhile to be made, but it was still thrown together almost haphazzardly.The show is written to be more organized than that, alot better jokes, commercials of its own, a host, maybe a theme song. Thanks for giving me an idea. -DR
booooooooring. It could easily get better.
I found the part with Sonic slightly funny, and the Mario wasnt bad but jesus they both sucked. No offense, but don't quit your day job.
It's quite sad...
...when the Co-Writer reviews his own movie. Meh, anyway it's a start, but music and subtitles for the interviews are a must! All I could catch was Mario's paranoia. About what I do not know. Keep at it.
supersonic4336 responds:
Actualy he had nothing to do with this movie. He didn't start contributing until I started to write the first whole episode. Which is probably why I was stupid enough to miss the subtitles on that scene. I'll have to fx that, since the whole series will have subs. Will have music also. This is very trimmed down. thanks for the comment btw - DR
Reality.
Booooooooooooooooooooooo. Enough said.