thats kewl...
that ur hunting for opinions while ur completing it. most songs people make pretty much say "here it is like it or suck it". if your going for a loop its alright but maybe another side of the song would be good. like as it is it goes into a change up and perhaps more bass. and a whole other beat.. wouldnt recomend the piano bit again though. its nice that one time but otherwise would kind of just repeat itself. anyway, i would have downloaded it but it kind of trips overitself. little longer and ill be back to download it for sure. anywho great as it is. just add more to it and make it 3 mins and im sure itll be amazing